What do you think of this song?

V1: so this is what i wanted


i asked and i received


but now i find that it


is crashing down on me


its not what i imagined


in my fairy tale


and what i was waiting for...


lets just close the door





C: so this is what it comes down to


head over heart


was head over heels


now its tooth and nail


so lets turn it around,


from finish to start


or beter yet


just no start at all





V2: Who are we fooling?


its not what it once was


started on the right foot


but studder stepped too much


we were a sure thing


like a home run


till he jumped at the wall


now were just an out





C:and this is what it comes down to


head over heart


was head over heels


now its tooth and nail


so lets turn it around,


from finish to start


or beter yet


just no start at all





V3: how did i not see this coming


at me like a hummer


now im a deer in the headlights


and your stepping on the gas


and we both know


this is the end


of you and me


and what i thought was life





C: And this is what it comes down to


head over heart


was head ov

What do you think of this song?
pretty cool


=]
Reply:who sings it?
Reply:sounds like every other song out there so i guess that could be a good thing for you.
Reply:i love the c. very moving
Reply:You wanted me to read all that? Well then I have one for you. And everyone else who posts should post their own song to!





We both know that I shouldn't be here


This is wrong


And baby, it's killin' me, it's killin' you


Both of us trying to be strong


I've got somewhere else to be


Promises to keep


Someone else who loves me


And trusts me fast asleep





I've made up my mind


There is no turning back


She's been good to me


And she deserves better than that





[Chorus:]


It's the hardest thing I'll ever have to do


To look you in the eye and tell you I don't love you


It's the hardest thing I'll ever have to lie


To show no emotion when you start to cry


I can't let you see what you mean to me


When my hands are tied and my heart's not free


We're not meant to be


It's the hardest thing I'll ever have to do


To turn around and walk away, pretending I don't love you





I know we'll meet again


Fate has a place and time


So you can get on with your life


I've got to be cruel to be kind


Like Dr. Zhivago


All my love I'll be sending


And you will never know


'Cause there can be no happy ending





[Repeat chorus]





(Spoken:)


Maybe another time, another day


As much as I want to, I can't stay





(Sung:)


I've made up my mind


There is no turning back


She's been good to me


And she deserves better than that
Reply:try to rhyme,get a flow to it,you know.and try to be a little more concise about what you are trying to say.that should do it.other than that,it is all good.you got talent and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.you should call it ''unaware''.(no pun)